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i need more 😭😭😭😭😭

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so, i thought i liked the story, but apparently our cousin is an romance option (i'm not playing a game with disgusting morals)

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See you! Glad you like the Prologue.~

Romancing Eirik is the one of the least F*ked up thing in the story. This game is def not for you.  

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the other fucked up things in the story u wrote weren't kind of the MC's background? what does that even has to do with u putting the option of a incestuous relationship?

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You said didn't want to play a game with disgusting morals. I am reaffirming that belief.  I'm informing you (and other people who may come across your comment) that the optional hidden romance with your cousin, is in fact one of the more moral aspect (as it is morally questionable, but politically astute) of the story.  If that makes you uncomfortable, then everything else in the content warning will probably make things worse. Because they are in fact, much worse. 

This is game, at it's core, is a political drama about solving a succession dispute between cousins. Those familiar with the political fantasy drama genre (or GOT/ASOIAF in general) will know what sometimes happens when there is a need/want to consolidate the line succession in noble families with cousins. 

This game is dark and Eirk's Route are for the sick bitches like me who don't mind exploring the more taboo/unconventional aspects of game scenario. And for those who don't want to engage with it, there are the other conventional/wholesome  romantic interests for them to pursue. (Thea and Finn are a good place to start!) 

It's not for you and that's okay. The IFs genre is very large and there are probably other games that can scratch the same itch for you. 

Bye~

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Lmao, this is fantasy and historical. Royals used to marry their own blood all the time with the belief that it will keep their bloodline "pure". If you can't even accept historical facts than I agree that this story is not for you. The old age was not pretty nor filled with rainbows and unicorns. Cinderella lied to you. There's no such thing as happy ending.

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Oh mate, that's the least messed-up thing here, therefore the author is undoubtedly correct. I don't know what planet you reside on, but I can assure you that people still marry cousins today on earth(I've seen them)..

~ Please say goodbye to the IF and yourself if the story doesn't meet your expectations. 

You have the audacity to criticize the author for crafting the tale in their own distinctive way. Which is quite awful  and.....You need to develop the ability to criticize someone while remaining polite.

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incest still happening those days doesn't make it less fucked up (and yes, i also have seen but bc i have uncles that date their cousins). now let  me tell you; i wasn't criticizing anyting, i was saying the obvious (this game has d-i-s-g-u-s-t-i-n-g morals).

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if you want to pretend that this is right js bc it happens in real life, or as the author, bc you are a "sick bitch", i couldn't care less.

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Since you don't seem to want to understand anything at all, allow me to say this plainly.

Whether you agree with the author's narrative or not, your opinion won't make much of a difference to it.

I apologize if this sounds impolite, but you must accept the above words regardless of how you feel about it.

If this isn't for you, you'd be better off forgetting it.

~The writer did point out that the game is a dark fantasy, and .... we all know that politics was never a place for fairytales.. 

You speak in a manner that can only be described as RUDE.

You claim that you don't give a damn, yet your words clearly show that you do.

Have a good day ahead :)

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did i said the story sucked? no.  did i say that I (myself) wasn't going to play bc i didn't like of certain thing? yes, i did. did i try to tell someone not to read/play because of it? no, i didn't. you seem to think i  was trying to get something out of it, like make the author feeling bad (bc u called me rude and impolite) bc of it? i'm not gonna keep answering, go touch some grass and stop fighting other people fights, the author had already said something to me before u replied (i couldn't care less about sounding polite, u would be alike if u weren't trying to look like the right one)

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 The story has such an intriguing premise and such a fantastic start.  you're bloody talented, dear author!!

Despite the fact that I have only read the prologue...I would still be furious if somebody were to hurt my brothers 💀 🗡️

Without a doubt, this is one of my favorite IFs ever. I'm excited for more ✨❤️ 

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Thank you so much for the very nice comment! I like you!  😭 

I hope you enjoy Chapter 1 when it comes around as well ❤️

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😭 ✨

I'm certain I'll enjoy chapter 1 in the future!!

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That was absolutely gorgeous!
— The UI is simple and elegant, It's one of my favorite Twine IF design so far!
— The characters are real and complex, even though there's only the prologue, we can already see that.
Can't wait for chapter one, I'll keep an eye on this one for sure. :)

The original template was made by Vahnya! So I can't take all the credit :D I'm flattered you enjoy the characters from the demo alone!! 

Hope to see you again for Chapter 1 ! 

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Soo sad to see the demo end. Was really goood. Felt so bad for the MC poor kid

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I love the demo, it's very good. You got me there. Good luck with the rest, I can't wait to get back to my brothers. 😊

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Sooooooo nice !The write is really beautiful.

Looking forward for new chapter

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Hm, later on will you be required to pay for later chapters?

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This game will be free all the way until the game is finished. Then i'll have a demo available for the first handful chapters and the full game for sale (with a few extra things thrown inside) but that's something for the far off future. <3

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Hello, it might be a dumb question but where is the save button?

Loving the demo btw, can't wait for more! And saw you answer on Tumblr about incest is the least f*cked thing with that route bwahahahh! I'll let you cook, don't want to waste my therapy bills hehe

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If you were playing on mobile, the menu buttons were cut off and inaccessible (lmaooo) but it's been fixed now!  You can access it with the arrow icon in the header. 

It's gonna be a messed up and wild ride. Thanks so much for playing~

Lili

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I WANT MOREEEEEEEE KLR4ML2M

I think it's actually a dark mode and you can't change to light, the text size doesn't change either. 

But the story itself is promising.

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Thanks for letting me know~ The theme has been removed and the text -size issue has been fixed <3

Thanks so much for playing. 

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I can't wait for more chapters ^^

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